This is what the professor said is wrong with the original paper. Can you help me go for 21 out of 50 to a little higher please?
General comments and feedback:
Cover Page – good
Running head not proper format; ensure APA
Points not deducted due to meeting after submission
Pg 2, intro seems okay; references probably needed
Extra spaces between paragraphs, remove
Para 2, APA in-text citation required; citations needed throughout paragraph
Pg 2, para 1, appropriate citations needed throughout paragraph
Used 1, probably need 3-4 at least
Needs headers to break up information into sections
Basic writing throughout; references used minimally
Pg 4, para 1, references clearly needed; in-text citation included incorrect
Almost every paragraph, study or studies included and discussed without references as required
Way too much fact as opinion due to lack of citations
Information would be really good and fit requirements if research and sources were properly utilized throughout
References
Extra spaces not needed
#1, 3, 4, 5 – titles, no caps unless proper (#2 is correct on this)
Remove dates from all retrieved froms
Missing 2 required citations (min. 7)
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